Comments on: Along the Line http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/ Wraeththu Fan Fiction Wed, 18 Nov 2009 02:42:04 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Fanfic Challenge Winner! « Forever Wraeththu http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-467 Fanfic Challenge Winner! « Forever Wraeththu Wed, 08 Jul 2009 23:47:48 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-467 [...] “Along the Line” by Thevina [...] [...] “Along the Line” by Thevina [...]

]]> By: Sildil http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-446 Sildil Sat, 18 Apr 2009 20:06:33 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-446 Congratulations, this win was SO well deserved! Congratulations, this win was SO well deserved!

]]> By: Thevina http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-442 Thevina Sat, 11 Apr 2009 19:07:20 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-442 Sildil, thank you so much for your comments! I was in excellent company, but grateful for your vote. :) Elfscribe, many thanks for your beta as well as your support and letting me know what parts were particularly vivid. Fairjennet, thanks so much for the comments! I'm thrilled that that sentence drew you into Cal's head; it was a compelling, dark vortex of oddly dispassionate revenge. Glad I wasn't there for very long while writing this story!! ;) Sildil, thank you so much for your comments! I was in excellent company, but grateful for your vote. :)
Elfscribe, many thanks for your beta as well as your support and letting me know what parts were particularly vivid.
Fairjennet, thanks so much for the comments! I’m thrilled that that sentence drew you into Cal’s head; it was a compelling, dark vortex of oddly dispassionate revenge. Glad I wasn’t there for very long while writing this story!! ;)

]]> By: fairjennet http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-431 fairjennet Sat, 04 Apr 2009 05:10:23 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-431 A gorgeous bit of writing. Gorgeous and dark and disturbing. This line sucked me into Cal's headspace: "Cal felt it all. Hyper-aware, he was a note plucked by mocking forces in the universe, the catastrophic overtones ringing through the ethers, a threnody for Orien." A gorgeous bit of writing. Gorgeous and dark and disturbing.
This line sucked me into Cal’s headspace: “Cal felt it all. Hyper-aware, he was a note plucked by mocking forces in the universe, the catastrophic overtones ringing through the ethers, a threnody for Orien.”

]]> By: elfscribe5 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-428 elfscribe5 Thu, 02 Apr 2009 21:52:14 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-428 Amazing piece of writing. I think you quite captured Cal's insanity and I'm impressed that you were able to go there. And the song really works. Love these: "They were futile darnings at the edge of a yawning, irreparable tear that had slashed his heart." "This is all a dream, a nightmare sent to me, Cal thought to himself as the last shred of his corroded sanity stepped outside of his corporeal self. It watched dispassionately, this Calanthe ghost, as the air grew heavy, suffocating with the energy of Cal’s violent, murderous storm." Amazing piece of writing. I think you quite captured Cal’s insanity and I’m impressed that you were able to go there. And the song really works.

Love these: “They were futile darnings at the edge of a yawning, irreparable tear that had slashed his heart.”

“This is all a dream, a nightmare sent to me, Cal thought to himself as the last shred of his corroded sanity stepped outside of his corporeal self. It watched dispassionately, this Calanthe ghost, as the air grew heavy, suffocating with the energy of Cal’s violent, murderous storm.”

]]> By: Sildil http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/2009/03/29/along-the-line/#comment-424 Sildil Thu, 02 Apr 2009 06:08:25 +0000 http://foreverwraeththu.wordpress.com/?p=314#comment-424 Absolutely brilliant. DEFINITELY gets my vote. Absolutely brilliant. DEFINITELY gets my vote.

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